tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3000108869645491608.post4224590159380697453..comments2023-04-29T00:16:20.580+12:00Comments on Hinerangi: How Bees Get Their StripesPES Blogs Admin 2015http://www.blogger.com/profile/00718590749281782598noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3000108869645491608.post-45218803381318210362018-09-07T11:58:22.126+12:002018-09-07T11:58:22.126+12:00Hi Hinerangi I really like your use of double adje...Hi Hinerangi I really like your use of double adjectives before the noun "...fluffy, cuddly honey makers." This adds extra detail and engages your readers. I like the idea that bees are flying around in little jumpers too. Mr Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14831955844410099547noreply@blogger.com