Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Hinerangis Awesome Narrative short Story.

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

In a far far away place there lived a superhero called Haley.
Haley has blond hair, red eyes and smelly toes. Haley lived in a dark forest all alone.  

One day Haley decided to go to the beach to have a swim. Suddenly she saw mermaids  coming towards her. So then Haley saw a cute boy called Ben. Ben has black hair, Hazel eyes and he likes the color blue.

The next day Haley went back to the beach to see if the mermaids were still there. Then Haley swam all the way into the ocean but the mermaids were already gone. Unfortunately Haley couldn’t swim fast so she got eaten up by a big fat whale. Inside the whale’s mouth it smelt very stinky and its mouth felt very soggy. Suddenly she heard a big bang. Haley felt very scared because she couldn’t get out of the whale’s mouth.

In the morning Haley felt very sick like she wanted to spew up. The day Haley got stuck in the whale's mouth she had an Idea. Her Idea was that the way she got in the whale’s mouth the way she was gonna get out. But then Haley’s Idea never worked. So she had another Idea which was that when the whale will spew water out she would go with it. So then her Idea worked. As soon as she got out of the whale's mouth she saw the mermaids. Unfortunately Haley couldn’t breath under water so she sunk.

When the mermaids caught Haley, Haley never woke up until the morning. In the morning Haley woke up but she never remembered anything but the mermaids. When she woke up she only remembered the mermaids. The Haley and Ben got together. SO THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER...

Task Description...

Today Room 10 has made our new short story. My story was about a superhero but her weakness was that she couldn't swim. 




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