WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
One day there was a group of heroes called the Avengers, The Avengers were always there to save the day. Vision and Scarlet Quicksilver would always noticed that there was something that was wrong. The problem was that there was a group of Robots in the City. Captain America was on his way to the City but Vision was already there. They all wanted to charge especially the Avengers.
The Robots were destroying the City and they all did not care. (They laughed) Captain America, Hulk, Thor, Scarlet QuickSilver, Iron man, Black Widow, Vision and Spiderman were there. Captain America wanted to fight the Robots and the Robots “said” let's fight. Thor, Vision and Spiderman were going to stop the fight and leave it for tomorrow. The next day Captain America snuck out of bed and went to the City.
The rest of the group was worried that he might of been already fighting the Robots on his own. But he wasn’t. Scarlet, Thor, Hulk and Vision went off to the City. The City was a big place. They were all living in Krypton, Krypton was there home and Superman’s Home. But not for Captain America.
It was 2:30 in the Morning the Avengers all went as a group to the City where they could find Captain America. They all saw Captain America in a Hotel, Hulk was bumping into every wall and all the Ladies were screaming. AHHH AHHH AHHH AHHH GOODNESS. The Avengers went to find Captain America and there he was in Hotel number 37A. They all went back to Krypton and started training.
The fight wasn’t until 11:30, It was only 7:30 They had only 3 hours and 30 minutes. Captain America “said” that there was not enough time, Hulk “said” that there was plenty of time. Captain America never agreed with Hulk. So every single person started training hard there was Climbing, Jumping and Running.
It was going on 9:30 Captain America wanted to leave already so they did. The Avengers were destroying the Robots Captain America was so Happy that he was smiling. They all defeated the Robots but they all saw Spiderman and Black widow on the ground but Captain America helped save Spider Man. Lucky he survived. Black Widow was playing a Joke. (they all laughed except Captain America, IT’S NOT FUNNY… THE END
For this presentation we had to pick a picture for our story. The story is about The Avengers that get's into a fight with a lot of Robot's there will be a picture for you at the top to look at. This story has a lot of paragraphs and if you like it please send me a comment. From Hinerangi...