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Thursday, 9 February 2017

Hinerangi Chicken fried noodles

Walt: write quality introductions.
Have you ever tasted fried WORMS before? Well believe it or not our teacher might be crazy, Because he fed us chicken fried WORMS and It was horrible. I wasn’t expecting that.  


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Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.

Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
Task Description:
In this lesson we had to write a story including Chicken flavored noodles. What we did was that we pretended that they were Worms instead of Noodles. Everyone wrote a story that was our introduction and wrote it separately.

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